Sunday, October 30, 2011

Lip-Liner 1


Was reading an old post Lip Liner .. tried to write something beyond it.


In the moonlight, i take the air and think everyday,
what had led me not to stay ?
Fascinating was thy world, enticed me into temptation,
engrossing me thoroughly, accepted the inclination,
still i passed through the other way,
wondering what had led me not to stay ?

25 comments:

the other side of me said...

I wonder too what had led me not to stay ..

Nice piece babe as usual

P.S: I love the way you commented on my posts..its just full of wisdom..really :)

Rahul said...

wat led u not to stay????:-) i guess familiarity proved to be too boring for you..and u set out for newer pastures..;-)

Cяystal said...

Nice play of words ha..
And i guess the search for novelty or maybe annoyance and sorrow at that which exists compels us to not stay ..

Saru Singhal said...

Mind blowing Reicha...I will take lessons from you on how to write once I'm back...It's so magical...Love it!

A grain of sand said...

"wondering what had let me not to stay"...
so intrsopective and deep :)

Amigo said...

"still i passed through the other way,
wondering what had led me not to stay ?"----wow!!!all i can say is now i am addicted to your blog :p

Krishna said...

nicely arranged words....

Rahul Bhatia said...

Beautiful thoughts and words, Reicha!

Red Handed said...

Beautiful lines!!!
What else can I possibly say. Mesmerizing!If only I could write this way

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

@aleeya --> thanks darling.. I love to visit your blog and you know this very well. Your simple words are always perfect in its own ways.

@Rahul --> :P thanks for your comment. Sometimes we ask questions but the truth is, we already know the answer but don't wanna accept it. :)
Take care !!

@Crystal --> Hmm, may be, but, for something better i believe :)

@Saru --> OMG ! its your humbleness. A profound writer like you is always an inspiration for me. Is eager to meet you soon :)

@A grain of sand --> Thanks for your visit. :)
Take care !!

@Amigo --> Haha ! thanks, *blushing*

@Krishna --> Thank you :)

@Rahul sir --> Thanks for the appreciation !

@Red handed --> I am glad to see you here :) thanks for dropping a comment.

Punam said...

Very nice, reicha..
So did you find the answer?
What had led you to the other way?

Surendra shukla" Bhramar"5 said...

very nice ...let the people ponder ...good
Fascinating was thy world, enticed me into temptation,
engrossing me thoroughly, accepted the inclination,
still i passed through the other way,
Bhramar5

Aakriti said...

Ah....ur lines just make me feel of the "right" decision taken by a girl...its like she followed her basic instincts, even though the road was alluring and enticing....
being safe than sorry:)

RAHUL: The Weakest Point is Love said...

wondeful :-) sometimes i too feel the same..

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

@Punam --> thanks..! Answer hmm, i'll find it soon :)

@ Surendra shukla --> Thanks for your visit sir.

@Rahul --> Thanks. oh okay. There is a long way to go ahead. Take care !

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

You deduced it so correctly..Must say
You are a true psychology student. ;)
This was the author's real intention but for the sake of poetry it was replaced by a question in the end.
Take care !

Alcina said...

What could have happened always intrigues us na..
Sometimes looking back and wondering is good but sometimes it makes us loose the present that could have happened..
Like you i have also been pondering on a poem in past and wrote its second part :) ..co-incidence indeed!
Like the calm and longed nature of your penning..

tc

subtlescribbler said...

ur own conscious made u take such a decision for it was only right to let go and move ahead :)

PS : the mystery behind the title is still not solved :P

sarah

some unspoken words said...

written beautifully .each and evry word seems very apt.
nice post:)
sorry for begin so late. thnx for the comment on my blog.

some unspoken words said...

written beautifully .each and evry word seems very apt.
nice post:)
sorry for begin so late. thnx for the comment on my blog.

inquisitive-life said...

Reicha,

Beautiful... I can connect to your writing style.
"engrossing me thoroughly, accepted the inclination"..."led me not to stay"....

Amazing work...

Encore!!!

TheBluntBlogger said...

Wondering what had lead me not to stay :)oh well :) everyone's life story...

keep it up reicha <3 loved and the last line nailed it.

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

@Aakriti --> You deduced it so correctly..Must say
You are a true psychology student. ;)
This was the author's real intention but for the sake of poetry it was replaced by a question in the end.
Take care !

@Alcina --> Thanks alcina.. Oh ! yep i'll surely go through the second part of your poem. I'll love to read it :)

@Sarah --> Yep, the inner conscious speaks aloud and i step in that direction only. :)
PS: The mystery behind the title will remain a mystery till i don't get a good answer for your question.. :D

@Anuradha --> Thank you gal. I am glad to see you back :)

@AAnkeet --> Thanks. *smiling* :) Take care !!

@Chintan ji --> Everyone's life story :D
This post and your note of part one resembles a little(only part one) :P .. Grin on my face when i saw your comment on my post.
Your visit makes me happy :)

alka narula said...

beautiful words , thanx for sharing....

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